Beyond basic manners, what strategies can individuals use to leave a lasting and positive first impr
학생이 쓴 원문
As we live, we meet and engage with various people. In most situation, there are rudimentary manners between people, which makes relationship more reliable and smoother. However, beyond basic manners, people can use more sophisticated strategies and skills to leave a positive and intensive impression in both professional and social settings. In my opinion, the most effective strategic is remembering someone\'s name. By telling someone\'s name you remembered in advance, the other might feel thankful and respected. In addition, staying smile, confident and neat have a positive effect on your impression. These attitudes will attract more people around you because these impressions can make people around you feel comfortable and safe. Lastly, being a good listener is a very important skill to last positive impression of you. People feel connected and valued when you show an attitude of carefully listening.
강사 첨삭
[이름],
You expressed your thoughts very well and gave excellent, practical strategies for making a meaningful first impression. Using someone\'s name and being an active listener are highly sophisticated interpersonal skills. Great work! ^^
I might gently disagree with the name part, though. As someone attentive yet forgetful, I sometimes even forget my friends’ names. So while remembering names is powerful, it’s also important to show genuine attentiveness in other ways, like remembering details of conversations or showing interest in what the person shares. That balance makes impressions even more meaningful. :)
~ Trixia
CONTENT:
As we live, we meet and engage with various people.
~ CORRECT.
In most situation, there are rudimentary manners between people, which makes relationship more reliable and smoother.
~ In most situations, there are rudimentary manners between people that make relationships smoother and more reliable.
However, beyond basic manners, people can use more sophisticated strategies and skills to leave a positive and intensive impression in both professional and social settings.
~ CORRECT.
In my opinion, the most effective strategic is remembering someone\'s name.
~ In my opinion, the most effective strategy is remembering someone\'s name.
By telling someone\'s name you remembered in advance, the other might feel thankful and respected.
~ By using a person\'s name, they will likely feel appreciated and respected.
In addition, staying smile, confident and neat have a positive effect on your impression.
~ In addition, smiling and staying confident and neat have a positive effect on your impression.
These attitudes will attract more people around you because these impressions can make people around you feel comfortable and safe.
~ CORRECT. BETTER SAY: These traits will attract people to you because they make those around you feel comfortable and safe.
Lastly, being a good listener is a very important skill to last positive impression of you.
~ Lastly, being a good listener is a very important skill for leaving a lasting positive impression.
People feel connected and valued when you show an attitude of carefully listening.
~ People feel connected and valued when you show that you are listening carefully.
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