Can you share a time when you really worked hard to achieve a goal?
학생이 쓴 원문
sure
first of all i tried to speak english since when i decided to become a cabin crew member
i turn on a english podcast like a background sound while i\'m working
because i\'ve heard that many input help me improve english level
and i\'ve memorized english sentence
i knew international airline cabin crew member required clear communication skill with many different passengers
that\'s why i wold like to get an advanced english skill
강사 첨삭
Hello, Na[이름]! I really like how you connected your English learning journey with your dream of becoming a cabin crew member. Your effort to surround yourself with English through podcasts and memorizing sentences shows great dedication. I think your goal gave you strong motivation to keep improving, and it’s inspiring that you worked consistently toward your dream.
~T. Jenna
sure first of all i tried to speak english since when i decided to become a cabin crew member
>>Sure. First of all, I tried to speak English after I decided to become a cabin crew member.
i turn on a english podcast like a background sound while i\'m working
because i\'ve heard that many input help me improve english level
and i\'ve memorized english sentence
i turn on a english podcast like a background sound while i\'m working
because i\'ve heard that many input help me improve english level
and i\'ve memorized english sentence
>>I turned on English podcasts as background sounds while I was working because I\'ve heard that a lot of input helps me improve my English level. I\'ve also memorized English sentences.
i knew international airline cabin crew member required clear communication skill with many different passengers
i knew international airline cabin crew member required clear communication skill with many different passengers
>>I knew that international airline cabin crew members required clear communication skills with many different passengers.
that\'s why i wold like to get an advanced english skill
that\'s why i wold like to get an advanced english skill
>>That\'s why I would like to develop advanced English skills.
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Sure. First of all, I worked hard to improve my English after I decided to become a cabin crew member. I listened to English podcasts as background sounds while I was working because I heard that getting a lot of input could help me improve my English skills. I also memorized useful English sentences every day. I knew that international airline cabin crew members needed strong communication skills to interact with passengers from different countries. That is why I wanted to develop advanced English skills and achieve my goal of becoming a cabin crew member.
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Sure. When I decided to become a cabin crew member, I worked hard to improve my English skills because I knew clear communication was essential for the job. I listened to English podcasts as background audio while working and memorized useful English expressions every day. Through consistent practice, I became more confident in English and continued working toward my goal of becoming a cabin crew member.
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