Chloe\'s resolution
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Last friday, Definitely, I can\'t speak english well
Because I didn\'t prepare for lesson and review...
I has been so busy tomorrow I was cook,clean home and take care my children
and I was not good sleep Because my dauther very moving.. So I decide to sleep separate with my children
I will make sentence to 3 forward.. maybe every other day and I try speak more slowly and more thinking with you
I am very hurry so I say lot of quickly!
강사 첨삭
Hi, Chloe!
Thank you for sharing your experience with me. I can really understand how busy and tiring your day must have been, especially taking care of your children and not getting enough sleep. It’s already a big effort that you still tried to attend class.
Your ideas are clear, and I can see that you are trying to reflect on your English learning, which is really good. I also like your goal of speaking more slowly. That will help you a lot, and I’m here to support you with it.
Don’t worry too much about making mistakes. Just keep trying to express yourself, and you will improve step by step.
~Teacher Polly
>>Last Friday, I definitely couldn’t speak English well.
Because I didn\'t prepare for lesson and review...
>>Because I didn’t prepare for the lesson and review.
I has been so busy tomorrow
>>I had been very busy the day before.
I was cook,clean home and take care my children
>>I cooked, cleaned the house, and took care of my children.
and I was not good sleep Because my dauther very moving..
>>And I did not sleep well because my daughter was very active.
So I decide to sleep separate with my children
>>So I decided to sleep separately from my children.
I will make sentence to 3 forward...maybe every other day
>>I will make three sentences moving forward, maybe every other day.
I try speak more slowly and more thinking with you
>>I will try to speak more slowly and think more when I speak with you.
I am very hurry so I say lot of quickly!
>>I am always in a hurry, so I speak very quickly!
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