clothes and personality
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes. I think clothes represent personality. If not, why is the world so full of different styles? People unconsciously think that they seek out styles that fit them well and that fit them well.
강사 첨삭
Yes. I think clothes represent personality.
>> CORRECT
If not, why is the world so full of different styles?
>> If not, why is the world full of so many different styles?
People unconsciously think that they seek out styles that fit them well and that fit them well.
>> CORRECT
If not, why is the world so full of different styles?
>> If not, why is the world full of so many different styles?
People unconsciously think that they seek out styles that fit them well and that fit them well.
>> People unconsciously seek styles that suit them and reflect who they are.
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