"COURT ORDERS COMPENSATION FOR VIC[이름]S OF SEWOL FERRY DISASTER"
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When reading this article, I\'m so angry because I knew that our government didn\'t effort to rescue vic[이름]s for SEWOL ferry disaster.
>> When I was reading this article, I was so angry because I know that the government didn\'t make enough effort to rescue the vic[이름]s of the SEWOL ferry disaster.
Frankly, It\'s still mystery status so all of Korean want to know what was it behind hidden story.
>> Frankly, it is still a mystery, so all Korean want to know what was behind the hidden story.
Despite finding out veiled truth, the conclusion was complicated.
>> Despite finding out the veiled truth, the conclusion was complicated.
I thought previous government always denied there wrong decision and not admitted fault.
>> I thought that the previous government had always denied their wrong decision and did not admit their fault.
No ones who were politicians didn\'t announce real facts to press conference.
>> No one from the politicians announced the real facts to the press conference.
In this result, it showed that they weren\'t eligible for managing South korea.
>> Correct
I want to say to politicians. If vic[이름]s were your son or daughter, Did they look at sinking down ferry in the sea?
>> I want to tell the politicians, \"If the vic[이름]s were your sons and daughters, Will you just look at the ferry sinking at the bottom of the sea?\"
I don\'t think so. Even if the incident of ferry disaster didn\'t aviod that [이름]e, they had to be effored to rescue vic[이름]s.
>> I don\'t think so. Even if the incident with the ferry couldn\'t have been avoided at that [이름]e, they should have done more to rescue the vic[이름]s.
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