Do you believe in “silent apologies,” like showing regret through actions instead of words?
학생이 쓴 원문
No, I don\'t believe in it.
Of course, you might feel sorry as much as you can\'t say anything.
But in general, if someone didn\'t apologize verbally, I would think they don\'t want to accept their faults.
Apologies must be sincere. Those two things will help with that.
First, you should say sorry clearly, and then, you should express how you are feeling.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름] [이름]! Your answer is clear and strongly expresses your opinion about the importance of verbal apologies. I like how you emphasize sincerity and direct communication, which makes your argument firm and easy to understand. Your structure is also good, you explain your belief and then give conditions for what makes an apology sincere. To improve, focus on smoother phrasing (like “but still be unable to”), and complete your final sentence for better flow. Overall, your response is confident, logical, and well-expressed, great job!
-Teacher Wela
Of course, you might feel sorry as much as you can\'t say anything.
>> Of course, you might feel sorry but still be unable to say anything.
But in general, if someone didn\'t apologize verbally, I would think they don\'t want to accept their faults.
>> But in general, if someone doesn’t apologize verbally, I would think they don’t want to accept their faults.
Apologies must be sincere. Those two things will help with that.
>> Apologies must be sincere, and there are two things that can help with that.
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