Do you enjoy jam-packed festivals or quiet gatherings? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Well, it seems to depend on the situation.
I really like festivals and festivals that I wanted to go to, so I understnad that people are jam-packed, but I usually enjoy quiet gatherings.
Because I\'m an extrovert, I meet a lot of people in work time. So, when I have time, I keep quiet and charge my energy. In addition, I have hobbies that I go to quiet places or enjoy static hobbies such as reading a book.
강사 첨삭
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Well, it seems to depend on the situation.
>> CORRECT.
>> CORRECT.
I really like festivals and festivals that I wanted to go to, so I understnad that people are jam-packed, but I usually enjoy quiet gatherings.
>> I really like the festivals I’ve always wanted to go to, and I understand they will be jam-packed, but I usually enjoy quiet gatherings
Because I\'m an extrovert, I meet a lot of people in work time.
>> Because I\'m an extrovert, I meet a lot of people during work time.
So, when I have time, I keep quiet and charge my energy.
>> CORRECT.
In addition, I have hobbies that I go to quiet places or enjoy static hobbies such as reading a book.
>> In addition, I have hobbies; I go to quiet places or enjoy static hobbies such as reading a book.
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