Do you prefer studying alone or with other people? Why?
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Each one prefers to study with other people in an independent space.
This means that I prefer to study in a space where other people can study because it is divided into partitions in one room, creating an independent space.
Because it would be great to study alone, but it is studying with other people can create a good opportunity to see other people studying and to be stimulated and to correct their lazy mind and sttitude. However, if I study with other people, there may be more things that interfere with my study if I study alone.
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Each one prefers to study with other people in an independent space.
>> CORRECT.
This means that I prefer to study in a space where other people can study because it is divided into partitions in one room, creating an independent space.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I prefer studying in a place where people study in the same room, but the space is divided by partitions, giving everyone some privacy.
Because it would be great to study alone, but it is studying with other people can create a good opportunity to see other people studying and to be stimulated and to correct their lazy mind and sttitude.
>> Studying alone is great, but studying around other people can motivate me because seeing others work hard encourages me to improve my attitude and avoid being lazy.
However, if I study with other people, there may be more things that interfere with my study if I study alone.
>> However, studying with other people may be more distracting than studying alone.
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