Do you think food is an important part of a country\'s culture?

2026-04-13 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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I think some food can show their cultures and traditinal foods includes thier their history. For example, 부대찌개 is famous food in my country. It was made in 1950 by American soldiers. In the past, South korea is one of the most poor country in the world and some American soldiers who worked in South korea often gave some food to us. We got a lot of spam and sausages from U.S Soldiers. We tried to mix with Kimchi soup. Because of soup can be eaten by many people and It was important because peoples didn\'t money to eat. Attempt was success. This food became a famous food in Korea. My remember, I ate it one a week. It is really delicious but It has a history of South korea that poor period.

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Hi, Joon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. Camille

I think some food can show their cultures and traditinal foods includes thier their history.
>> I think some traditional food can show their cultures and history.
For example, 부대찌개 is famous food in my country. 
>> For example, 부대찌개 is a famous food in my country.
It was made in 1950 by American soldiers.
>> CORRECT!

In the past, South korea is one of the most poor country in the world and some American soldiers who worked in South korea often gave some food to us.
>> In the past, South Korea is one of the poorest countries in the world and some American soldiers who worked in South Korea often gave some food to us.
We got a lot of spam and sausages from U.S Soldiers. 
>> CORRECT!
We tried to mix with Kimchi soup.
>> We tried to mix with it Kimchi soup.
Because of soup can be eaten by many people and It was important because peoples didn\'t money to eat.
>> It\'s because soups can actually be eaten by many people, and it was important because people didn\'t have enough money to buy food.
Attempt was success. 
>> The attempt was a success.
This food became a famous food in Korea. 
>> CORRECT!
My remember, I ate it one a week.
>> I remember, I eat it once a week.
It is really delicious but It has a history of South korea that poor period.
>> It is really delicious but it signifies that South Korea used to be poor.

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