Do you think it is right to make important decisions for other people? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think it depends on situations. If the important decision is a public issue which effects a lot to other people, I may consider other people and choose an option which profits to most of people. For example, whether we use plasitc dishes or not is related with our environment pollusion. And if possible, we should use multiple-used item to protect the earth. However, if the selection is only affect to myself, then I don\'t need to care another person. For example, which job I choose in the future is my own decision and not effect to others.
강사 첨삭
Your response shows balanced thinking by explaining that decisions for others depend on whether the issue is public or personal. I especially like your example about environmental protection, which clearly supports your reasoning and makes your answer more practical. You also structured your answer well by presenting two contrasting situations, which improves clarity. To improve, focus on word choice such as \"affects\" vs. \"effects,\" spelling (like \"plastic\" and \"pollution\"), and more natural expressions like \"reusable items.\" Overall, your response is thoughtful, logical, and well-organized, great job!
-Teacher Wela
I think it depends on situations.
>> I think it depends on the situation.
>> I think it depends on the situation.
If the important decision is a public issue which effects a lot to other people, I may consider other people and choose an option which profits to most of people.
>> If the important decision is a public issue that affects many people, I may consider others and choose the option that benefits most people.
For example, whether we use plasitc dishes or not is related with our environment pollusion.
>> For example, whether we use plastic dishes or not is related to environmental pollution.
And if possible, we should use multiple-used item to protect the earth.
>> If possible, we should use reusable items to protect the environment.
However, if the selection is only affect to myself, then I don\'t need to care another person.
>> However, if the decision only affects me, then I don\'t need to consider other people.
For example, which job I choose in the future is my own decision and not effect to others.
>> For example, which job I choose in the future is my own decision and does not affect others.
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