Do you think it\'s important to have hobbies? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I one hundred percent agree with that.
Some people live for their work, but most people are not a workerholic.
Even if you are a workerholic, you can\'t live without having some time for fun.
Hobbies enrich your life and you can get new experiences while enjoying your hobbies.
You can\'t be a professional soccer player, but you can be a soccer player in your soccer club.
You can\'t fish for living but you can fish for fun.
There is no limitation choosing your hobbies.
강사 첨삭
I really like what you said, [이름] [이름]!
I agree that hobbies make life more enjoyable. They help us relax, learn new things, and have fun. I think everyone should have at least one hobby they love.
- Kristine ^^
Yes, I one hundred percent agree with that.
>> Correct.
Or >> I couldn\'t agree more.
Some people live for their work, but most people are not a workerholic.
Some people live for their work, but most people are not a workerholic.
>> Some people live to work, but most people don\'t.
Even if you are a workerholic, you can\'t live without having some time for fun.
Even if you are a workerholic, you can\'t live without having some time for fun.
>> Even if you\'re a workaholic, you still need some time to have fun.
Hobbies enrich your life and you can get new experiences while enjoying your hobbies.
Hobbies enrich your life and you can get new experiences while enjoying your hobbies.
>> Hobbies enrich your life, and you can gain new experiences while enjoying them.
You can\'t be a professional soccer player, but you can be a soccer player in your soccer club.
You can\'t be a professional soccer player, but you can be a soccer player in your soccer club.
>> You might never play soccer professionally, but you can still enjoy playing it as a hobby.
You can\'t fish for living but you can fish for fun.
You can\'t fish for living but you can fish for fun.
>> You don\'t have to fish for a living to enjoy fishing.
There is no limitation choosing your hobbies.
There is no limitation choosing your hobbies.
>> There are no limits when it comes to choosing a hobby.
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