Do you think people living in different climates develop diffrent personalities? Why or why not?.
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I think diffrent are live in people is, food,weather,nature are diffrent.
So diffrent climates develop diffrent personalities.
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Do you think people living in different climates develop different personalities? Why or why not?.
I think diffrent are live in people is, food,weather,nature are diffrent.
>>> I think people live differently, and food, weather, and nature are also different.
>>> OR: People live differently, and food, weather, and nature are different too.
So diffrent climates develop diffrent personalities.
>>> Different climates shape different personalities.
>>> OR: Different weather makes people develop different personalities.
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