Do you think people should always do their best, even if they believe the outcome is out of their co
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I think people should always do their best, even if they believe the outcome is out of their control.
Because no matter how much you can\'t control the outcome, there are many things you can gain from the actions you take to produce the outcome to the process. If people think the outcome is out of control and do things roughly, we could not and will not be able to develop this much.
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I think people should always do their best, even if they believe the outcome is out of their control.
>> CORRECT
Because no matter how much you can\'t control the outcome, there are many things you can gain from the actions you take to produce the outcome to the process.
>> Because no matter how much you can\'t control the outcome, there are many things you can gain from the actions you take to produce the outcome in the process.
If people think the outcome is out of control and do things roughly, we could not and will not be able to develop this much.
>> OR: If people think the outcome is out of control and act hastily, we will not be able to develop this much.
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