Do you think people today are good at making decisions? Why do you think so?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t think people make good decision thesedays. I think people usually use AI when they have to make decision. For example, when we choose our dinner, we can just ask ChatGPT as like \'Recommand dishes for dinner\'. Then, the AI give us several options and even chooses best option. Like this, people today have too much dependency to AI. Therefore, we need to practice to think when we make a decision even it is a simple question. Otherwise, after several years, we won\'t do anything without AI.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Mary! Your answer presents a clear and relevant argument about how AI may affect people’s decision-making skills. I like your practical example about choosing dinner, it makes your point easy to understand and relatable. You also included a strong conclusion about the risk of overdependence on AI, which shows good critical thinking. To improve, focus on plural forms (decisions), spelling (these days, recommend), and more natural phrases like dependence on AI. Overall, your response is logical, modern, and thought-provoking, great job!
-Teacher Wela
I don\'t think people make good decision thesedays.
>> I don\'t think people make good decisions these days.
I think people usually use AI when they have to make decision.
>> I think people usually use AI when they have to make decisions.
For example, when we choose our dinner, we can just ask ChatGPT as like \'Recommand dishes for dinner\'.
>> For example, when we choose what to eat for dinner, we can just ask ChatGPT something like, “Recommend dishes for dinner.”
Then, the AI give us several options and even chooses best option.
>> Then, the AI gives us several options and may even choose the best one.
Like this, people today have too much dependency to AI.
>> In this way, people today have too much dependence on AI.
Therefore, we need to practice to think when we make a decision even it is a simple question.
>> Therefore, we need to practice thinking when we make decisions, even if they are simple ones.
Otherwise, after several years, we won\'t do anything without AI.
>> Otherwise, in a few years, we may not be able to do anything without AI.
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