Do you think people today fear aging more than in the past? Why or why not?
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I think modern people hate getting age, even someone disgust it.
So, someone mock elder and weaker such as disable.
Especially, it tend to be worse on the internet.
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I think modern people hate getting age, even someone disgust it.
>> I think modern people hate getting older, and some people are even disgusted by it.
So, someone mock elder and weaker such as disable.
>> As a result, some people mock the elderly and weaker individuals, such as people with disabilities.
Especially, it tend to be worse on the internet.
>> This behavior tends to be even worse on the internet.
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