Do you think renting furniture or gadgets is a good idea? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think renting furniture is good idea. Because it is useful when we don\'t need furniture or gadgets forever. For example, if we rent a house for one year, it is burden to us to buy new furniture because we might move the house next year. And if the furniture is huge, it also causes problem about moving. In other case, we usually rent water purifier becasue it require us to change filters regularly. When we use renting service, the renting company manages everything. So, we can feel it very convenient.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Mary! Your answer clearly explains why renting furniture and gadgets can be practical and convenient, especially for temporary living situations. The example of moving frequently and avoiding the burden of buying or transporting large furniture is very relevant and well thought out. You also gave a good real-life example of renting water purifiers, which strengthens your argument. To improve, focus on article usage (“a good idea,” “a burden”), verb agreement (“it requires”), and more natural phrasing. Overall, your response is logical, practical, and easy to understand, great job!
-Teacher Wela
I think renting furniture is good idea.
>> I think renting furniture is a good idea.
Because it is useful when we don\'t need furniture or gadgets forever.
>> Because it is useful when we don’t need furniture or gadgets permanently.
For example, if we rent a house for one year, it is burden to us to buy new furniture because we might move the house next year.
>> For example, if we rent a house for one year, it is a burden to buy new furniture because we might move next year.
And if the furniture is huge, it also causes problem about moving.
>> And if the furniture is large, it can also cause problems when moving.
In other case, we usually rent water purifier becasue it require us to change filters regularly.
>> In another case, we usually rent a water purifier because it requires regular filter changes.
When we use renting service, the renting company manages everything.
>> When we use a renting service, the company manages everything.
So, we can feel it very convenient.
>> So, we find it very convenient.
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