Eng[이름]h composition correction

2018-04-11 · 첨삭 강사 Brian

학생이 쓴 원문

It is my specific goal to get into the swing of Eng[이름]h. The reason why I want to be good at Eng[이름]h is that I hope to get into a foreign company. I've tried to speak and write Eng[이름]h for several years, but I've failed. Until now, I have [이름]tened and dictated news and movie and I'm not using them at all. So I've regretted to pay no attention to speaking and writing. It happened that my Eng[이름]h teacher recommended me to start to learn Eng[이름]h over the phone. so I followed his advice and started Eng[이름]h lessons by phone. Through this Eng[이름]h lessons, I want to make my Eng[이름]h stronger and more fully skillful. and I really want to make Eng[이름]h sentences that I studied mine and then using those things with others.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]
Thank you for doing your assignment

Keep up the good work! ^^


Teacher Brian,




It is my specific goal to get into the swing of Eng[이름]h.
>> it is my goal to learn the Eng[이름]h language
The reason why I want to be good at Eng[이름]h is that I hope to get into a foreign company.
>> I am hoping to get into a foreign company that\'s the main reason why I want to be good in Eng[이름]h
I\'ve tried to speak and write Eng[이름]h for several years, but I\'ve failed.
>> I tried learning the Eng[이름]h language in years but I failed
Until now, I have [이름]tened and dictated news and movie and I\'m not using them at all.
>> Until now I spend time reading Eng[이름]h news and Movies but It\'s not helping at all
So I\'ve regretted to pay no attention to speaking and writing.
>> I need to pay attention to speaking and writing
It happened that my Eng[이름]h teacher recommended me to start to learn Eng[이름]h over the phone.
>> My Eng[이름]h teacher recommended me to start learning Eng[이름]h over the phone
so I followed his advice and started Eng[이름]h lessons by phone.
>> I followed his advice and started Eng[이름]h lessons through phone
Through this Eng[이름]h lessons, I want to make my Eng[이름]h stronger and more fully skillful.
>> Through this method I am hoping that I can improve my Eng[이름]h Skills
and I really want to make Eng[이름]h sentences that I studied mine and then using those things with others.

>> I want to learn Eng[이름]h sentences and use them in a daily conversation.

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