FEEDBACK FOR NEW INTERVIEW

2026-07-22 · 첨삭 강사 Jenna

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FEEDBACK FOR NEW INTERVIEW

강사 첨삭

Hello, Ms. [Name][이름]! Please check the following.
~T. Jenna

1. Why did you apply to Dasan Pharm?
>>I applied to Dasan Pharm because I want to continue developing my career in pharmaceutical overseas sales while expanding my experience in the CDMO business. At Seoul Pharm, I managed the entire export process, from regulatory support and production coordination to shipment management. Through this experience, I learned that success is not just about selling products but also about delivering projects reliably and building customer trust. I believe my experience in coordinating customers and manufacturers will allow me to contribute to Dasan Pharm\'s global growth.

2. What are your long-term career goals, and how does Dasan Pharm fit into those goals?
>>My long-term goal is to become a trusted global pharmaceutical business professional. I believe Dasan Pharm is the ideal place because its growing CDMO business will help me deepen my expertise in global project management and customer partnerships. By applying my overseas sales and export experience, I hope to contribute to the company\'s global growth while continuing to develop my expertise with the company over the long term.

3. How do you handle conflicts with your teammates or manager?
(Or: Tell me about a time you had a conflict with a coworker. How did you handle it?)
>> I rarely experience conflicts with my teammates or managers because I try to communicate openly and respect different perspectives. However, if a conflict arises, I first listen carefully to understand the other person\'s perspective before sharing my own opinion. If I realize there is something I can improve, I am always willing to make changes because I believe open communication and mutual respect are the keys to resolving conflicts and maintaining a positive working relationship.

4. How do you think you can contribute to Dasan Pharm?
>>I believe I can contribute by providing reliable support to global customers throughout the entire export process. At Seoul Pharm, I managed overseas projects involving customer communication, regulatory support, production coordination, and shipment management. This experience taught me how to coordinate multiple stakeholders and ensure stable, on-time project delivery. As Dasan Pharm continues to expand its global CDMO business, I believe my experience will help strengthen partnerships with overseas clients and support the company\'s long-term global growth.

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