fortune telling
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t believe fortune telling and feng shui.
Like things give people unnecessary worry and irrational hope.
People who want to depend on absolute power like god are easily misled.
The worse the economic situation, people fall into superstiton easily.
I think that uncertain predictions have no role to our life.
I am also against enjoying fortune telling and tarot just for fun .
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름]!
I understand you because I also do not believe in fortune-telling. I have a belief that only God can do things. Apart from that, I don\'t believe anything anymore.
Aki~
I don\'t believe fortune telling and feng shui.
>>> I don\'t believe in fortune telling and feng shui.
Like things give people unnecessary worry and irrational hope.
>>> CORRECT!
People who want to depend on absolute power like god are easily misled.
>>> CORRECT!
The worse the economic situation, people fall into superstiton easily.
>>> The worse the economic situation, the more people fall into superstition easily.
I think that uncertain predictions have no role to our life.
>>> I think that uncertain predictions have no role in our lives.
I am also against enjoying fortune telling and tarot just for fun .
>>> I am also against fortune-telling and tarot as a form of entertainment.
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