Have you ever bought something you didn\'t need just because it was a bargain or on sale? What did y
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I once bought something I didn\'t need because it was a bargain or on sale. Most of them were food, and I bought clothes and shoes.
Because I like food, and I think I thought that if I had a bargain or on sale, I could buy them at a lower price than usual and I could do things that I had delayed. So, I bought them.
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I once bought something I didn\'t need because it was a bargain or on sale.
>> CORRECT.
Most of them were food, and I bought clothes and shoes.
>> CORRECT.
Because I like food, and I think I thought that if I had a bargain or on sale, I could buy them at a lower price than usual and I could do things that I had delayed.
>> Because I like food, I thought that if there was a bargain or sale, I could buy them at a lower price than usual and do things that I had delayed.
So, I bought them.
>> CORRECT.
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