Have you ever experienced discri[이름]ation?
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I usually feel discri[이름]ation because of my big sister. My grandmother love me very much. But when my sister enter school or on her birthday, My grandmother give money my sister much more than me. Not only my grandmother also my father and mother.
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I usually feel discri[이름]ation because of my big sister.
>>CORRECT
My grandmother love me very much.
>>My grandmother loves me very much.
But when my sister enter school or on her birthday, My grandmother give money my sister much more than me.
>>But when my sister entered school or when it was her birthday, my grandmother gives my sister more money than me.
Not only my grandmother also my father and mother.
>>This also happens with my father and mother.
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