Have you ever turned a disappointment or failure into motivation to become a better person?
학생이 쓴 원문
I turned a disappointment or failure into motivation to become a better person.
When I was preparing for employment, my self-esteem was very low. Because I just put in the resume every dropped.
However, based on that failure, I prepared the resumes more meticulously and tried to obtain many certificates so that I could be better than others.
There was also a time when I failed an interview, and it was an opportunity to analyze what answers were wrong and what was the cause of the failure based on the failed interview.
강사 첨삭
Hey, Ji [이름]. Thank you for your hard work on today\'s writing activity. You expressed your ideas clearly and showed good effort in organizing your thoughts. Your writing continues to improve with each lesson, and your willingness to apply feedback is helping you make steady progress. Excellent effort today. I look forward to reading more of your writing in our next class. Keep up the great work! ~Teacher Jane c\",)
I turned a disappointment or failure into motivation to become a better person.
>> CORRECT
When I was preparing for employment, my self-esteem was very low. Because I just put in the resume every dropped.
>> Back when I was preparing for employment, my self-esteem was very low because I was rejected every time I submitted a resume.
However, based on that failure, I prepared the resumes more meticulously and tried to obtain many certificates so that I could be better than others.
>> OR: However, because of that failure, I prepared my resume more meticulously and strived to obtain various certifications to get ahead of others.
There was also a time when I failed an interview, and it was an opportunity to analyze what answers were wrong and what was the cause of the failure based on the failed interview.
>> CORRECT
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