Hello Glenda, this is [이름]

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T. Glenda

Hello Glenda, glad to meet you!

I\'m engaging in Kyunghee Univ and not absolutly good to speak out in English.

>> I am currently a student of Kyunhee University but I\'m not that good in speaking English.

I\'ve belong to Department of Political Science and it take me a huge pleasure, learning politics and international relations.
>> I belong to the Department of Political Science and it\'s a great pleasure to be learning politics and international relations. 

or

>>> I am in the Department of Political Science and I without a doubt enjoy learning politics and international relations. 
 Anyway, i\'ve sometimes written English essay and present on the podium in Englihs and i did it by myself but i think it is hard to fix my wrong habits and errors about English.
>> Anyway, I\'ve sometimes written English essays and presented it in English in front of audience. But I think it id hard for me to correct my wrong habits and errors about English.
When i 22, in 2015, i\'ve studied in Johns Hopkins Univ on Washington D.C.

>> When I was 22 years old, I\'ve studied in John Hopkins University in Washington D.C.

The experience was so impressive.

>> Correct

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>>> The experience was extraordinary.

Every passionate global players research under their fields especially political science and global issue.

>> Every passionate global players research under their fields especially in political science and global issues.

Those people and international organizations inspired me moving myself forward and having some thought to compete with them.
>> Those people and international organizations inspired me to move myself forward and gave me some thoughts to compete with them.
 But environment of Korea wasn\'t enough.

>>But in Korea, I have limited exposure in English.

Native Koreans are not fluent in English and even academy did not teach me well.
>> Native Koreans are not fluent in English and even the academy did not teach me well.
So i register Pweng and i look forward to it for my improvement
>> So I registered in your website and I look forward to it for my improvement.
I will do my best sincerely with you
>> I will sincerely o my best with you.
See ya:)