hi polly!
학생이 쓴 원문
I was sad on last friday
My son receive an award Because he did the best in the 3Quter.
So other parents of award children went to school and congratuation their children.
But I didn\'t receive email from the teacher So My son only alone...
I asked teacher Why didn\'t you told me??
She said I\'m so sorry I missed email for your family.. I was mistake..
But my son said It\'s okay I didn\'t know It is an award lol
강사 첨삭
Hi, Chloe!
Thank you for sharing your experience. I understand why you felt sad and disappointed, especially since it was an important achievement for your son and you wanted to be there for him.
Your writing is clear and well-organized, and you expressed your feelings in a natural way. Just a few small grammar adjustments help make your sentences smoother.
Keep it up—you are doing a great job expressing your thoughts in English.
~Teacher Polly
>>I was sad last Friday.
My son receive an award Because he did the best in the 3Quter.
>>My son received an award because he did his best in the third quarter.
So other parents of award children went to school and congratuation their children.
>>So the parents of the award-winning students went to school and congratulated their children.
But I didn\'t receive email from the teacher So My son only alone...
>>But I didn’t receive an email from the teacher, so my son was alone.
I asked teacher Why didn\'t you told me??
>>I asked the teacher, “Why didn’t you tell me?”
She said I\'m so sorry I missed email for your family.. I was mistake..
>>She said, “I’m so sorry. I missed the email for your family. It was my mistake.”
But my son said It\'s okay I didn\'t know It is an award lol
But my son said It\'s okay I didn\'t know It is an award lol
>>But my son said, “It’s okay. I didn’t know it was an award lol.”
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