Hi teacher, it's [이름]
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Andrea! Did you have a good weekend?
I study English yet, but I don't know how to write answer sheets.
Please convert my answer sheet.
I will memorize modified answer sheets, So, today's night, I will talk them.
1.What is your favorite color?, and why?
My favorite color is green. because i think that green is symbol of freshness. so i made the monitor background green. and my bicycle‘s color is green.
2.Please introduce your hometown.
My hometown is bicycle city. my city is full of bicycles. because the mayor made the city a bike-friendly city. for example, each bus stop has a bicycle rental machine. and the bike road is all over changwon
3.Have you been crying lately?
Yes. when i broke up with my girlfriend three months ago. i was very sad. but i thought that. it is a chance. From then on i studyed very hard.
4.Is there a city you would like to travel to?
If i have a week‘s time is. i want to go to sapporo of japan. because i heard that, sapporo is cool even in summ
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!^^
Happy Monday!^^
I really had a good weekend! Thank you so much for asking. I hope you had a great weekend too!^^
Tips in writing:
1. Make sure that when starting a sentence, fist letter should be capitalized.
2. Use the right punctuation when ending the sentence.
Period (.) if it is a statement. e.g I am 30 years old.
Question mark (?) if it is a question. e.g How are you?
Exclamation point (!) if it has a strong emotion. e.g Finally, I passed the interview!
3. Make sure that proper nouns are capitalized.
Example: Chognwon, Busan, Korea
4. Make sure that the pronoun \"I\" is always capitalized.
~~T. Andrea
Hi Andrea! Did you have a good weekend?
>> Correct
I study English yet, but I don\'t know how to write answer sheets.
>> I\'ve been studying English but I don\'t know how to write my answers on the answer sheet.
>> OR: I\'ve been studying English but I am having hard time on my writing skills.
Please convert my answer sheet.
>> Please correct my answers on the answer sheet.
I will memorize modified answer sheets, So, today\'s night, I will talk them.
>> I will memorize the modified answers, so that I can say it tonight.
1.What is your favorite color?, and why?
>>1. What is your favorite color? and why?
My favorite color is green. because i think that green is symbol of freshness. so i made the monitor background green. and my bicycle‘s color is green.
>> My favorite color is green because I think that it is symbol of freshness. In fact, I change my computer screen\'s background to green and my bicycle is green too.
2. Please introduce your hometown.
>> Correct
My hometown is bicycle city. my city is full of bicycles. because the mayor made the city a bike-friendly city. for example, each bus stop has a bicycle rental machine. and the bike road is all over changwon
>> My hometown is known as the Bicycle City. Form the word itself, my city is full of bicycles. Our mayor wants it to be a bike-friendly city. Each bus stop has a rental machine and the bike road is all over Changwon.
3.Have you been crying lately?
>> Correct
Yes. when i broke up with my girlfriend three months ago. i was very sad. but i thought that. it is a chance. From then on i studyed very hard.
>> Yes, it is because my me and my girlfriend broke up three months ago. I was really sad but I made it as my motivation to study hard.
4.Is there a city you would like to travel to?
>> 4. Is there a city you would like to travel to?
If i have a week‘s time is. i want to go to sapporo of japan. because i heard that, sapporo is cool even in summ
>> I want to go to Sapporo, Japan because I heard that, the place is cool even in summer.
~~T. Andrea
>> Correct
I study English yet, but I don\'t know how to write answer sheets.
>> I\'ve been studying English but I don\'t know how to write my answers on the answer sheet.
>> OR: I\'ve been studying English but I am having hard time on my writing skills.
Please convert my answer sheet.
>> Please correct my answers on the answer sheet.
I will memorize modified answer sheets, So, today\'s night, I will talk them.
>> I will memorize the modified answers, so that I can say it tonight.
1.What is your favorite color?, and why?
>>1. What is your favorite color? and why?
My favorite color is green. because i think that green is symbol of freshness. so i made the monitor background green. and my bicycle‘s color is green.
>> My favorite color is green because I think that it is symbol of freshness. In fact, I change my computer screen\'s background to green and my bicycle is green too.
2. Please introduce your hometown.
>> Correct
My hometown is bicycle city. my city is full of bicycles. because the mayor made the city a bike-friendly city. for example, each bus stop has a bicycle rental machine. and the bike road is all over changwon
>> My hometown is known as the Bicycle City. Form the word itself, my city is full of bicycles. Our mayor wants it to be a bike-friendly city. Each bus stop has a rental machine and the bike road is all over Changwon.
3.Have you been crying lately?
>> Correct
Yes. when i broke up with my girlfriend three months ago. i was very sad. but i thought that. it is a chance. From then on i studyed very hard.
>> Yes, it is because my me and my girlfriend broke up three months ago. I was really sad but I made it as my motivation to study hard.
4.Is there a city you would like to travel to?
>> 4. Is there a city you would like to travel to?
If i have a week‘s time is. i want to go to sapporo of japan. because i heard that, sapporo is cool even in summ
>> I want to go to Sapporo, Japan because I heard that, the place is cool even in summer.
~~T. Andrea
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