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Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for taking the time to answer our essay question.
We live in a complex world with complex people.
But I agree with you when you said that all experiences whether simple or complex are valuable.
That\'s why we have to value each and one of them.
I hope you\'re doing okay.
See you in class later. :)
~Charry
QUESTION: Are simple joys as valuable as complex experiences? Why or why not? Explain your answer in not more than ten (10) sentences
Dear, Ms. [Name],
>> CORRECT!
I think it is very different feeling or opinion for each people about this(it\'s a depend on personality)
>> I think the feelings or opinions about this matter varies for each person. It also depends on one\'s personality.
In my opinion, it\'s dosen\'t matter that experience was complex or not.
>> In my opinion, it\'s doesn\'t matter whether the experience was complex or not.
I think more important thing is what I learn feeling or realize through that experience.
>> I think the more important thing is, what I have learned or realized through that experience.
By joy and complex experience we can compare own past situation(good and bad memory) through this we can realize how appreciation mind even simple joys can be.
>> [Do you mean]: Through complex experiences, we can compare our own past situations, whether they\'re good or bad. Through this, we can realize and appreciate simple joys.
Therefore I think any experiences are very important especially when we are build up own mind.
>> Therefore, any experience is very important especially when we are build up our characters.
Best Regards
>> Best Regards,
[이름]
>> CORRECT!
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