homework-[이름]
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I\'m so proud of you.
You can make long sentences now.
Continue doing a good job.
Study the correct sentences I put below.
I\'ll see you in class!
~~ Teacher Sharon
When I become to cartoon charachter, I would be Cowaine.
>> If I could become a cartoon character, I would be Cowaine.
Because this name mians scary guy.
>> The name means a \"scary person.\"
I want to have flying and attack magic powers.
>> I want to fly and have magic powers.
Because I don\'t like woking ,
>> I don\'t like walking so I just want to fly.
I want to hit bad person and I want to enjoy speed.
>> I want to fight bad people and I want to enjoy speed.
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