homework-[이름]
학생이 쓴 원문
How can someone be a good dancer? Answer in 5 sentences or more.
I think I should do this to become a good dancer.
1. Are they can dance many typs of dance?
2. Are they also have strong strength?
3. Are they can easliy remember motions?
This is key of to be a good dancer.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
I think you are a really good dancer.
I wish to see the way you dance someday.^^
Please take note of the corrections below.
See you in class!
~~ Teacher Sharon
I think I should do this to become a good dancer.
>> Correct
Are they can dance many typs of dance?
>> I must learn many types of dance.
Are they also have strong strength?
>> I must make my body strong.
Are they can easliy remember motions?
>> Most importantly, I must memorize the dance moves.
This is key of to be a good dancer.
>> This is the key to be a good dancer.
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