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My feel when I play musical instruments is intersting. Because when I play I feeling self-respect pride.
And also I feel tremble. Because when I play musical instruments,
always someone looking me.
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Thank you for trying so hard to make complete sentences.
Continue practicing!
~~ Teacher Sharon
My feel when I play musical instruments is intersting.
>> I am interested in playing musical instruments.
Because when I play I feeling self-respect pride.
>> I have pride in my abilities to play musical instruments.
And also I feel tremble.
>> I also feel nervous sometimes.
Because when I play musical instruments,always someone looking me.
>> This is true when other people watch me when I play.
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