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2018-01-15 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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There are many ways of cooking eggs. I will telling you about cook fry egg. 1. Heat the oil in a heated frying pan. 2.Break the eggs and on the pan. 3.Fry follow one's taste, completely or not completly.

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Hi [이름]!

Happy Monday!

What a way to start the week.

I like that you have done your duties as a student this early.

I\'ll see you in class tomorrow!

~~ Teacher Sharon

There are many ways of cooking eggs.

>> Correct 

I will telling you about cook fry egg.

>> I will tell you how to fry an egg.
Heat the oil in a heated frying pan.

>> First, heat the oil in a frying pan.
Break the eggs and on the pan.

>>  Break the eggs onto the pan.
Fry follow one\'s taste, completely or not completly.

>> Fry according to your preferences.

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