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I think brush our teeth everyday is important. Because it helps our teeth is getting cleaned. When you brush teeth decayed teeth disappears,too.
Last when you keep teeth clean you can chewing foods well.
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I think brush our teeth everyday is important.
>> I think brushing our teeth everyday is important.
Because it helps our teeth is getting cleaned.
>> This helps our teeth to stay clean.
When you brush teeth decayed teeth disappears,too.
>> You can avoid tooth decay when you brush your teeth.
Last when you keep teeth clean you can chewing foods well.
>> Lastly, you can keep your teeth clean by removing food bits from your teeth.
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