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My best dream is I but new phone. The phone name is i-phone 7, and I went to first-class restaurant.
I was sleep to much time, and I go to waterpark with my best friends.
It was similar my future plane,so I hope my dream is real.
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Hi [이름]!
I love reading about your dream.
It\'s nice that you can already tell stories through writing.
Keep it up!
~~ Teacher Sharon
My best dream is I but new phone.
>> The best dream for me is buying a new phone.
The phone name is i-phone 7
>> The phone is an I-phone 7.
and I went to first-class restaurant.
>> I also went to a first class restaurant.
I was sleep to much time, and I go to waterpark with my best friends.
>> I also went to the waterpark with my best friends.
It was similar my future plane,so I hope my dream is real.
>> I really hope that my dream would come true.
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