[Homework]0507 [이름]\'s homework
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Homework
ESSAY (Please write a short essay to answer the question.)
> How do you feel when someone disagrees with you?
Answer
: It\'s not so feel but if I\'m wrong, I\'ll take it. And I\'ll find the wrong part and fix it together
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Thank you for this. Admitting your mistake is really good. Trying to fix it is even better.
- T. Beth
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It\'s not so feel but if I\'m wrong, I\'ll take it. >>> I will not feel too bad about it. If I am wrong, I\'ll take it.
And I\'ll find the wrong part and fix it together.
>>> Correct.
>>> Or: I\'ll figure out what is wrong then fix it together.
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