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ESSAY (Please write a short essay to answer the question.)
>> How can traffic accidents be prevented?
Answer
I think that we can\'t be prvented. There is no way. Because traffic accidents are caused by carelessness.
And so, well, The only way to prevent a traffic accident is to drive carefully.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. I agree, being careful an straying on the safe zone helps prevent car accidents.
- T. Beth
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I think that we can\'t be prvented. >>> I think that we can\'t prevent it.
>>> OR: I think it\'s not possible to prevent it.
There is no way.
>>> correct.
Because traffic accidents are caused by carelessness.
>>> correct.
And so, well, The only way to prevent a traffic accident is to drive carefully.
And so, well, The only way to prevent a traffic accident is to drive carefully.
>>> OR: Therefore, the only way to prevent a traffic accident is to drive carefully.
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