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What do you think is a common reason some families don\'t have a good relationship?
I think their personality is really different. So they many times get argument and fight. They need to concede. But that\'s hard to them
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I think their personality is really different. So they many times get argument and fight.
>> I think their personalities are really different, so they often get into arguments and fight.
They need to concede. But that\'s hard to them
>> They need to compromise, but that’s hard for them.
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