homework
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Are picnics better than eating in restaurants? Why or why not?
What would you pack in your picnic basket if you had unlimited choices?
I think I eat in restaurants better than picnics. I am not prefer eat outside. because I eating with dust.
I am worried about getting disease when I eat.
I want to choose beef , salad and fruit. I like beef and fresh fruit. but it is very expensive...
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[이름] [이름],
Thanks for sharing your thoughts here.
-Ash
I think I eat in restaurants better than picnics.
>> I prefer eating at restaurants to going on picnics.
I am not prefer eat outside. because I eating with dust.
>> I do not prefer eating outside, because I feel like eating dust.
I am worried about getting disease when I eat.
>> I am worried about getting a disease when I eat in an open area.
I want to choose beef , salad and fruit.
>> I would choose beef, salad, and fruits.
I like beef and fresh fruit. but it is very expensive…
>> I like beef and fresh fruits, but they are very expensive.
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