Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you think alcohol is important in celebrations? Why?
I think not important for celebrstions. We can celebrate and enjoy exepct alcohol. However if we have alcohol, we can enjoy very fun. So i prefer celebration with acohole
강사 첨삭
I think not important for celebrstions.
>> I think alcohol is not important for celebrations.
We can celebrate and enjoy exepct alcohol.
>> We can celebrate and enjoy ourselves without alcohol.
However if we have alcohol, we can enjoy very fun.
>> However, if we have alcohol, we can have more fun.
So i prefer celebration with acohole
>> So, I prefer celebrations with alcohol.
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