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government reduce oil tax.
>> The government should reduce the oil tax.
so Government is delaying the increase oil price. but Oil company increase the price.
>> The government is delaying the increase in oil prices, but oil companies are increasing the price.
so We cannot prevent oil price to reduce.
>> We cannot stop the oil price increase.
All families using public transportation. me too..
>> All families should use public transportation including me.
Goverment recommand to using transportation.
>> Our government recommends using public transportation.
Odd/Even Vehicle Operation System is being implemented.
>> The odd-even vehicle operation system is also being implemented.
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