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Is aging more about physical change or mental change?
I think physical will be more big change. Our mental is usally changing when we get experience. So we need to do exercise for keep our body but it\'s to hard and painful things
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I think physical will be more big change.
>> I think physical changes are bigger.
Our mental is usally changing when we get experience.
>> Our mindset usually changes as we gain experience.
So we need to do exercise for keep our body but it\'s to hard and painful things
>> Our mindset usually changes as we gain experience.
So we need to do exercise for keep our body but it\'s to hard and painful things
>> So we need to exercise to keep our bodies healthy, but it’s hard and sometimes painful.
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