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Do you think life becomes easier or harder as people age?
I think life becomes harder. Because when we were young around people care to us and if we got a fault, they easly forgive us. But become adult we need to care ourself and our body will be bad.
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I think life becomes harder.
>> CORRECT
Because when we were young around people care to us and if we got a fault, they easly forgive us.
>> When we are young, people take care of us, and if we make mistakes, they easily forgive us.
>> CORRECT
Because when we were young around people care to us and if we got a fault, they easly forgive us.
>> When we are young, people take care of us, and if we make mistakes, they easily forgive us.
But become adult we need to care ourself and our body will be bad.
>> But when we become adults, we need to take care of ourselves, and our health may get worse.
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