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2026-04-23 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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Do you think people change when they speak a different language? Yes it\'s really surprise things. When they use different language their voices are change. I think when we learn language, we learn pronunciation first. So our voice change during speak different language

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Yes it\'s really surprise things. 
>> Yes, it’s really surprising. 

When they use different language their voices are change. 
>> When people use a different language, their voices change. 

I think when we learn language, we learn pronunciation first. So our voice change during speak different language
>> I think when we learn a language, we learn pronunciation first, so our voices change when we speak a different language.

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