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2026-04-27 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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Do you think people help more in small communities or big cities? Why? In what situations is it better NOT to help someone? I think people can help us in small communities. because big cities is not friendship. they are busy in life. also they are competitive spirit. so I don\'t want to live in Seoul. I live in the south part of metropolitan area. if weak people, we need to help for someone. We should realize a just society.

강사 첨삭

[이름] [이름], 

Thanks for sharing your thoughts here. 

-T. Ash

I think people can help us in small communities.

>> I think people in small communities help each other more than people in big cities. 

 because big cities is not friendship. they are busy in life. also they are competitive spirit.

>> Big cities are not built on friendship because everyone is too busy competing with each other. 

so I don\'t want to live in Seoul.

>> I do not live in Seoul. 

 I live in the south part of metropolitan area.

>> I live in the Southern part of the metropolitan area. 

if weak people, we need to help for someone. 

>> If we see people who are struggling, we need to help them. 

We should realize a just society. 

>> We should keep in [이름]d that we live in a society. 


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