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Do you think cooking is an important life skill? Why or why not?
I think cooking is very important skill. If we have cooking skill, we can make meals cheaper and we can take many kind of cusines. That make our life rich
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I think cooking is very important skill.
>> I think cooking is a very important skill.
If we have cooking skill, we can make meals cheaper and we can take many kind of cusines.
>> If we have cooking skills, we can cook more cheaply and try many kinds of cuisines.
That make our life rich
>> That makes our lives richer.
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