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Will laptops become unnecessary in the future?
Maybe yes. because these days, many company realse smart glass. If we have smart glass we can see display with glass. So it\'s improve we don\'t need to use screen, and don\'t need to laptop
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Maybe yes. because these days, many company realse smart glass.
>> Maybe yes, because these days many companies are releasing smart glasses.
If we have smart glass we can see display with glass.
>> If we have smart glasses, we can see displays through the glasses.
So it\'s improve we don\'t need to use screen, and don\'t need to laptop
>> Maybe yes, because these days many companies are releasing smart glasses.
If we have smart glass we can see display with glass.
>> If we have smart glasses, we can see displays through the glasses.
So it\'s improve we don\'t need to use screen, and don\'t need to laptop
>> So this technology could improve our lives because we wouldn’t need to use screens or laptops anymore.
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