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Do you think healthcare in Korea is affordable? Why or why not~?
In Korea, government-funded medical expenses are generally affordable, and cancer treatment, in particular, is very cheap. On the other hand, plastic surgery and dermatology are expensive because they are mostly not covered by health insurance.
What challenges does Korea’s healthcare system face today?
I think robots like AI will replace many surgeries in the future.
강사 첨삭
Eun Gyo,
Thank you for sharing your thoughts here. I’ve got to say you’ve got amazing healthcare in Korea.
- T. Ash
In Korea, government-funded medical expenses are generally affordable, and cancer treatment, in particular, is very cheap.
>> CORRECT!
On the other hand, plastic surgery and dermatology are expensive because they are mostly not covered by health insurance.
>> CORRECT!
I think robots like AI will replace many surgeries in the future.
>> I think robots and AI will replace many surgeries in the future.파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.