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Hello Cathy! Happy Monday! If I have a chance to travel, I want to go to Europe. I don\'t know why, I think that there are something special about it. Maybe I want to go there because of The Da Vinci Code. I want to visit the places described in the book. If I go, I’ll go alone. I think it would be better to travel alone. I’d also like to go to Sapporo someday. I heard it snows a lot there. Maybe it’s because I like Japanese movies. A winter night with heavy snow feels kind of romantic. If I become single again, I think I’ll travel a lot. I think travel is one of the best ways to learn in life.

Hello Clark!

I like how you connected your travel dream to The Da Vinci Code. That kind of detail makes your idea more vivid. Traveling alone also says a lot about your personality. It shows independence and a desire to think and experience things in your own way. Not everyone is comfortable with that, but it suits you.

I also smiled at your image of Sapporo, a quiet winter night with heavy snow. It does feel romantic in a simple, peaceful way. You describe these ideas naturally, without forcing it, and that’s a strength in your writing.

And what you said about travel being a way to learn,I agree. Sometimes distance gives clarity. It helps you understand yourself better, not just the world.

Your English is becoming more natural, and your thoughts are flowing more smoothly. Keep going like this, Clark. You’re building something steady.

~Teacher Cathy

 

If I have a chance to travel, I want to go to Europe. I don\'t know why, I think that there are something special about it.

>> If I have a chance to travel, I want to go to Europe. I don\'t know why, I think that there is something special about it.

Maybe I want to go there because of The Da Vinci Code. I want to visit the places described in the book.

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OR>> Maybe I’d like to go there because of The Da Vinci Code. I want to see the places mentioned in the book.

If I go, I’ll go alone. I think it would be better to travel alone.

>>CORRECT

OR>> If I go, I would prefer to travel alone. I think traveling by myself would be better.

I’d also like to go to Sapporo someday. I heard it snows a lot there. Maybe it’s because I like Japanese movies.

>>CORRECT

OR>> I’d also like to visit Sapporo someday. I heard it snows a lot there, and I think that’s partly because I enjoy Japanese movies.

A winter night with heavy snow feels kind of romantic.

>>CORRECT

OR>> A snowy winter night feels really romantic.

If I become single again, I think I’ll travel a lot. I think travel is one of the best ways to learn in life.

>>CORRECT

OR>> If I become single again, I think I’d travel more. I believe traveling is one of the best ways to learn about life.