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학생이 쓴 원문
Do we learn more from finding out that we have made mistakes or from our successful actions?
My opinion is we can learn more from our mistakes. I will feel very sad when I made a mistakes. I don\'t like this memory, so l will try to fix it. We always say, \' failure is the mother of success\'. I think that someone who don\'t made failure cannot understand real success. The success is process, isn\'t to make result. We can feel pleasure from in the process and can feel great from the good results.
We cannot do well when we start. This time we made mistakes, and we fix it, and learn more. The kids are same. We don\'t any mistakes, cannot glow up. So don\'t afraid of mistakes. Mistakes bring us upstair.
강사 첨삭
Hello Eva,
Growing and developing yourself could be as simple as learning one new thing a day.
One step at a time.^^
Small learning develops into massive learning over time.^^
Have a nice day!!!
T. Jeny
My opinion is we can learn more from our mistakes. I will feel very sad when I made a mistakes.
>>In my opinion, we can learn more from our mistakes. I will feel very sad when I make a mistake.
I don\'t like this memory, so l will try to fix it.
I don\'t like this memory, so l will try to fix it.
>>correct
OR>>I don\'t like this kind of memory so I will do my best to fix it.
We always say, \' failure is the mother of success\'. I think that someone who don\'t made failure cannot understand real success.
>> We always say, \' failure is the mother of success.\' I think someone who has not experienced failure cannot understand real success.
The success is process, isn\'t to make result.
The success is process, isn\'t to make result.
>>Success is a process, not the result.
We can feel pleasure from in the process and can feel great from the good results.
>>We can feel pleasure in the process and can feel great from the good results.
We cannot do well when we start.
We cannot do well when we start.
>>correct
OR>>If we start it right, we can do well.
This time we made mistakes, and we fix it, and learn more.
>This time we made mistakes, and we fixed them and learned more.
The kids are same. We don\'t any mistakes, cannot glow up.
>>The kids are the same. We don\'t make any mistakes, cannot grow up.
So don\'t afraid of mistakes. Mistakes bring us upstair.
>>So don\'t be afraid of mistakes. Mistakes bring success.
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