Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I would like to pass Topic 11 because I think It has already been finished from my secured contract issue.
Request : Please make the answer concise and suitable for an English interview. I would like it to be about 3–5 sentences long and easy to speak naturally. (not two long to easily memorize)
What are some of your short-term and long-term goals?
My short-term goal is to adapt quickly to the company and become fully familiar with my responsibilities.
If I join the company, I will focus on learning the existing workflow, understanding customer accounts, and taking over buyer management smoothly. I want to ensure there is no gap in communication or export operations during the transition period.
My long-term goal is to develop new business opportunities and expand overseas markets.
Through meetings with buyers and participation in exhibitions or business consultations, I would like to discover new customers, enter new markets, and contribute to increasing the company\'s sales.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name][이름]! You have a clear and well-structured answer. I especially like how you separate your short-term and long-term goals and explain them with specific examples. It sounds practical and shows that you\'re thinking about both contributing immediately and growing with the company.
~T. Jenna
What are some of your short-term and long-term goals?
My short-term goal is to adapt quickly to the company and become fully familiar with my responsibilities.
>>Correct
If I join the company, I will focus on learning the existing workflow, understanding customer accounts, and taking over buyer management smoothly.
>>Correct
I want to ensure there is no gap in communication or export operations during the transition period.
>>Correct
My long-term goal is to develop new business opportunities and expand overseas markets.
>>My long-term goal is to develop new business opportunities and expand into overseas markets.
Through meetings with buyers and participation in exhibitions or business consultations, I would like to discover new customers, enter new markets, and contribute to increasing the company\'s sales.
>>Through meetings with buyers and participation in exhibitions and business consultations, I would like to find new customers, enter new markets, and contribute to increasing the company\'s sales.
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My short-term goal is to adapt quickly to the company and become familiar with my responsibilities. I want to learn the workflow, understand customer accounts, and ensure a smooth transition in buyer management. In the long term, I hope to develop new business opportunities and expand into overseas markets. By building relationships with buyers and participating in exhibitions, I aim to attract new customers and contribute to the company\'s growth.
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