homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Is it better to ignore or comfort a child during a tantrum? Why?
Have you ever thrown a tantrum when you were young? How did your parents calm you?
I think I try to comfort for my son. I cherish my son. but too much a tantrum I scold. sometime we need it.
When I was young, I don\'t remember. My mother told me [이름][이름] is very very gentle and quiet.
of course My mother is my side.
강사 첨삭
[이름] [이름],
Thanks for sharing.
I agree, sometimes we need scolding from our parents.
See you later!
-T. Ash
I think I try to comfort for my son.
>> I think I will try to comfort him.
I cherish my son. but too much a tantrum I scold.
>> I cherish my son, but when he throws tantrums, I scold him.
sometime we need it.
>> We need that at times.
When I was young, I don\'t remember.
>> I can’t remember when I was young.
My mother told me [이름][이름] is very very gentle and quiet.
>> My mom told me that I was very gentle and quiet.
of course My mother is my side.
>> Of course, my mom is on my side.
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