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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
I like to watch the world cup.
>> I like to watch the World Cup.
so I am looking forward for this game.
>> So, I am looking forward to this game.
I thinking about successful team. how should team made succesful.
>> I am thinking about what makes a successful team.
It just is organization and strategy.
>> It is all about organization and strategy
The role person is football manager and captain.
>> The people in charge are the coach and the captain.
I still don\'t forget 2002 world cup.
>> I can still remember the 2002 World Cup.
Then I was 12 years. Korea made miracle.
>> I was 12 years old then, when Korea made a miracle.
we get semi final legend. JiSung-Park also was that member.
>> We reached the semi-finals, and Park Ji-sung was one of the players
The whole of Korea was in a crazy.
>> The whole of Korea went crazy with excitement.
Because it was first time something like happened
>> It was the first time something like that happened.
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